Wednesday, March 5, 2008

Five Haikus For You

*haiku {a form of Japanese verse, written in 17 syllables divided into 3 lines of 5, 7 and 3 syllables per line.}


REVIVAL

Broken spirit cured
his love is an elixir
that renews my heart


BLACK LOVE

Eyes that resemble
two flawless pieces of coal
penetrate my soul


VITAL

Essential to life
is the presence of THE ONE
that GOD made me for


MAJESTY

Sublime ecstasy
as I seductively sway
mounted on your throne


ENLIGHTENMENT

Each day I wait for
enchanting conversations
that leave me spellbound

*okay, I'm better now. not mad anymore. well, a little, but whatever. being mad's getting old. peace!

5 comments:

Canon Adonis said...

vital and enlightenment are my two favs. good writing. Keep Doing It

Blameless Nubians said...

Great Piece!

eclectik said...

This is a hot blog
Glad I found it...I'll be back!

e.

LadyWritesTheBlues said...

@canon adonis-thank you so much, i really appreciate the luv!

@blameless nubians-thanks and i checked out your spot the other day-love it!

@eclectik-thanks and i'm on my way to yours to check it out....:)

jinni said...

I love majesty and enlightenment,very effective!